Talk:Tor-Par-Noden/@comment-86.142.61.190-20121222163645

OBJECTION!

The sentence that starts off like this "He gifted them with technology and intelect" has a typo/spelling mistake. The word "intelect" should be spelt "intellect". please fix the typo/spelling mistake. Also, "A city lives inside it's bark" is a strange statement, considering the bark of a tree is the tough, protective sheath on the outside of the tree. The word "bark" should probably be the word "trunk", but I wouldn't know because I didn't type up the article.